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LJ SURVIVOR 2020

Challenge 5: Caught in the Web



Silk thread slips through her fingers as she weaves it in and out counting aloud,

“Chain three, dc five, chain three, dc seven…”

On and on, around and around, carefully measured loops and knots and twists and turns, each pass enlarging the creation in her hands in tiny increments.

She daydreams as she works. Who will wear this? Will it be for a Christening, or a wedding, will someone place it on their piano and put a crystal vase of roses on it? She smiles as she imagines sunbeams passing through the crystal and painting colorful patterns over her finished work. It will take many more hours, days, and weeks until the delicate lace is complete, but she is confident that when finished it will be beautiful.

Her shawls are coveted. And she is paid well for her work, but the money never matters to her as much as the satisfaction she feels when she holds the finished product in her hands, or when she hears the delighted exclamations of prospective buyers as they examine her work.

The light is going, the sun sliding behind the mountains. She holds her handiwork up admiring the delicate pattern, and then carefully folds her work and gently places it in a pillowcase to keep it clean and safe. Rising slowly, she moves over to the window. She picks up a newspaper, rolling it up in her hands as she goes, then swipes it at the web a spider has been weaving all afternoon. She shudders as the spider’s craft falls to the floor along with a fly still struggling to free its weakening body from the thread.
Date: 2020-12-07 11:28 pm (UTC)

bleodswean: (Default)
From: [personal profile] bleodswean
*thunk* This short sharp story is just GUH !!!!!! That ending took a gorgeous meditation on handwork and craftsmanship and showed YOUR skill as a writer and storyteller!!!!! I'm stunned!
Date: 2020-12-08 08:20 am (UTC)

ashgael: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashgael
And so is Arachnea's curse.
Date: 2020-12-08 02:32 pm (UTC)

gunwithoutmusic: (Default)
From: [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic
I gasped at the end!

I crochet a lot as a hobby, so I know the feeling of all of the work that goes into those sorts of things. I have never attempted to do any sort of lace crochet, because God it just seems even more tedious than using yarn, but it's just the coolest thing to see what one simple strand of string can turn into if manipulated and knotted in just the right ways.

But to be so involved in one's self and one's own work that one cannot appreciate the hard work of others, or considers it to be a nuisance instead of a significant prize... well, it's very telling of the protagonist here, and gives me something to think about myself.

I was surprised to see such a short piece, but it was very effective and I wouldn't have wanted it any longer! Good job :D
Date: 2020-12-08 04:29 pm (UTC)

gunwithoutmusic: (Default)
From: [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic
I've tried knitting (my grandmother actually passed onto me all of her knitting supplies, so I have everything I need for it), but I find myself way too uncoordinated to do it well - the movements just don't compute in my brain for whatever reason! Maybe it's that I'm too comfortable with crochet and they really are completely different beasts (despite the fact that my husband always asks me if I'm going to do some "knitting" even though he KNOWS that I "crochet" lol).
Date: 2020-12-09 12:51 am (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] bsgsix
This is so deft and delicate - just the right length to convey the situation at hand. Anything more, and it wouldn't have hit home properly. Anything less, and I would feel like something was missing. But this is IT. The ending has such beautiful imagery, and I love the destruction of creation - the spider's web is gone, a task that takes work much like lacework would. It's a gorgeous irony, and I truly think this is an excellent piece! *hugs*
Date: 2020-12-09 07:54 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] halfshellvenus
I really liked the contrast here between the woman so carefully creating lace and losing herself in the beauty and the process, and the so-easily-dismissed spider whose careful craft is also her livelihood for entirely different and less 'noble' reasons.

This is artful storytelling! :)
Date: 2020-12-09 08:08 pm (UTC)

flipflop_diva: (Default)
From: [personal profile] flipflop_diva
I never actually thought I could feel sympathy for a spider, but the protagonist sure got me to in this tale! Damn lady!

Though I am impressed by her work! I have no talent for anything like that whatsoever. I've tried, but it's all ended up a jumped of string and nothing to show for it. Heh.
Date: 2020-12-09 09:54 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] alycewilson
This hurts my heart in the best way. One of your most finely crafted pieces!
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