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Prompt 3: Intaglio

Anne smiled watching Hannah’s face light up as she opened the little velvet box.

“Oh, Anne! This is so pretty! Thank you!” She carefully took the ring out of the box and placed it on the ring finger of her right hand, then raised her hand so the stone caught and reflected the candlelight.

“I’m so glad you like it, Hannah.”

“Was it one of your aunt’s?”

“No, but her collection of intaglio inspired me to find and get this one for you. See, it’s your birth flower carved into your birthstone.”

“It’s a chrysanthemum in citrine! Oh, Anne, it’s exquisite! You think of everything, you really do!”

The young woman rushed over and gave Anne the tightest, longest hug. “I love it! I love you!”

“Well, thank you, dear! I love you too.”

Herb looked somewhat perplexed and Teddy just looked uncomfortable. “It’s a ring.” He mouthed to his grandfather who shrugged in response.

“I think we’ve been out-gifted,” Herb sighed.

“Oh, no! I love everything, but this is such a beautiful and thoughtful birthday gift, and the setting is so pretty and delicate.”

“Filigree. I know that much.” Herb said.

“It’s so pretty!” Anne got another hug.

“I think I’ll get the cake. I need cake. How about you, Ted? Could you eat cake?”

“Always, Grandpa.”

Herb and Teddy loaded up everything from the table onto the little trolley and headed into the kitchen.

“Have you had a good birthday, Hannah?”

“The best. Honestly. You know Dad has me working in the store now?”

“Yes. He told me. He said you have a real gift for handling the customers and organizing things. He told me that he doesn’t know how he managed without you all these years.”

“He said that?”

“He did, and more. He’s very pleased with your work and I think he loves living with you and Teddy. He hasn’t put it in so many words, but he brags about you two all the time.”

“How does he seem to you, Anne? Really. Since the attack?”

“Good. Progressing. I think having you and Teddy on his side is making a big difference, and your help in the store has eased a lot of his stress. He has always been easy to be with, but he’s happy, Hannah. He really is.”


“I think so too. And I think that you and he…well, it’s none of my business, but…”

“You ever heard that old saying about nothing before the word “but” counts?”

Hannah laughed, “Okay. I’m going to quit while I’m ahead, but I’ve got my eyes on the pair of you.”

Anne smiled and gave the girl a quick hug.

“We’re progressing too,” and she winked.
Date: 2021-11-15 06:22 pm (UTC)

adoptedwriter: (Default)
From: [personal profile] adoptedwriter
Is this an excerpt from a larger story. I’m curious to know more. “The attack”….hmmm…
Date: 2021-11-15 06:59 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] jake67jake
Nice story. I was wondering if it was a continuation also. Glad to know there is more out there (I vaguely remember it from before... but soooo much reading between then and now).

Characters are so genuine. Nicely done.
Date: 2021-11-16 12:06 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] erulissedances
I love the concept of that ring. I have seen pieces like that in the past and the skill needed for that type of carving is insane! Just so far beyond my own skill-set. You've created a lovely little grouping here, and if this is a continuation (as you admit in the comments), I'm tempted to find the earlier stories. Then again, I have no spare time right now, so I might just join the group at this point in time and work from there.

Well done!

- Erulisse (one L)
Date: 2021-11-16 07:19 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] erulissedances
I would love to, just tell me how to join the formal group instead of just the "Lite" version. It's been fun to write again.

- Erulisse (one L)
Date: 2021-11-17 01:14 am (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] erulissedances
OK, I sent him an email. Thanks.

- Erulisse (one L)
Date: 2021-11-17 09:13 pm (UTC)

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From: [personal profile] gunwithoutmusic
Oh, I didn't think this was a continuation of your previous series until I saw Herb's name and it clicked with me, and I was so happy to see it! :) I liked seeing these characters again and getting this little glimpse into their lives. It seems like things are going well for everyone and, well, I like it when things go well for people. :)
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